Got Revised S&S

[danbuter]

Nice game. I'll probably be picking up the hardcover or 3 books (haven't decided) in the near future.

I do have some comments/suggestions:

1. Maybe change crypto-linquistics to something a normal person would say. It's way too scientific for a fantasy game. Codebreaker or just Read Scrolls perhaps?

2. In the Crypto description, you have backfire as 2 words. It's one.

3. In the thief chart, you have Noise as an ability?

Guess you can tell what my favorite DnD class is. ;D

Anyways, hope this doesn't sound too negative. I really like the bits I've read so far. Hopefully I will get a chance next weekend to sit and read the whole thing through. Congratulations on making a great game!

[Jason Vey]

Nope, doesn't sound negative at all. We always appreciate people catching typos. One of the nice things about Lulu is the ability to instantly fix those things.

I know crypto-linguistics is more scientific, but I dig the term and it's accurate. Good catch on "backfire," though.

The ability names on the thief chart are truncated to fit the table. It's referring to the Hear Noise ability.

[danbuter]

Got to read some more, and found some typos:

page 14 in Scrolls: Wizards can to scribe scrolls -> 'to' should be removed
page 19 in Disguise: even of other genders -> 'of' should be removed
page 20 in Assassinate: saving throw with to avoid instant death -> 'with' should be removed

[Jason Vey]

Page 19: "of other genders" is actually correct usage in that form.

I've fixed the others. Thanks!

[danbuter]

Read a bit more.
You have no price for Lorica Segmentata in the equipment section, though I'm assuming it's the same as chain and scale.

Also, one idea you might want to try for movement. Have dwarves not slow down as much due to medium and heavy armor. Maybe have a no armor/light armor speed, and a medium/heavy armor speed. It would be a nice little bonus for them (especially as compared to elves, which have tons of bonuses).

[Jason Vey]

We won't be making any more rules revisions for awhile, save to fix things that are confused or obviously don't work in play. But the game is ripe for houseruling, as drsamsara has demonstrated with his Onderland campaign!